June of Doom & Gloom - Week 4 discussion and etc. post

[huinare]

Welcome to week 4 (challenge details here yadda yadda)! We still have a week until July 1st, so we're not off the hook yet. I'm excited that finished stories have appeared on the scene!
Discussion in comments, if so desired. Woes, gloating, links to your stories? Optional discussion topic for all: Are there ways in which your writing has changed since around this time last year--in terms of writing style, themes, plot devices, characters, or whatever else? Go!

Comments

[zdenka]

Leaving my comment on the story here, since I don't have an account at the SWG:

I liked this! It's understatedly creepy, and it makes me want to read more. The last sentence is excellent.

[huinare.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I was definitely trying for understated.