huinare: (pallandë)
The thing now seen on many of your journals, where once you see it you post a poem you like in your own LJ.

I wasn't going to do this one because I'm not much for poetry (it's really hit-or-miss for me; some poems I love profoundly, many I just don't seem to get).  But here I am possibly verging on insomnia, or maybe just staying up a couple hours too late, so I found one I loved in high school. Plus ça change, plus c'est le même chose.

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   Up in a dirty window in a dark room is a star which an old man can see. He looks at it. He can see it. It is the star of the room; an electrical freckle that has fallen out of his head and gotten stuck in the dirt on the window.
     He thinks he can steer by that star. He thinks he can use the back of a chair as a ship’s wheel to pilot this room through the night.
     He says to himself, brave Captain, are you afraid?
     Yes, I am afraid; I am not so brave.
     Be brave, my Captain.
     And all night the old man steers his room through the dark . . .
huinare: (au levant)
Trying to read Ginsberg’s “Howl.” I’m having a difficult time with this. It’s one big run-on sentence. This is why I do not write–and read very little–poetry. I don’t do well with this kind of disorganization of words. I’ll leave that to those to whom it appeals. The reason my writing contains a profusion of colons and semi-colons is in fact due to my horror of run-on sentences with no real break in them. This is probably also why the only poetry I do love and occasionally attempt to write is that in classic blank verse.


ETA - On the plus side, I read several other poems, and I really liked "A Supermarket in California" and "Transcription of Organ Music."

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