ext_210135 ([identity profile] pandemonium-213.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] huinare 2012-05-27 01:28 am (UTC)

Why not simply change the verb tense in the first drabble to present tense? That's my recommendation. Think of this collection of drabbles as a series of paragraphs in a short story (and that's really how they read) so it seems only logical that the first of the series should be written in present tense since you do not have the luxury of transitional sentences in the structure of a drabble series.

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